I usually loathe writing poems with set structures..but this one..which follows a harsh syllable count of, 7,7,6,9 is a new venture for me.

T.S Elliot has a lot to answer for.

Very nice poem, good job. Take care & God bless!

-GJ

I've been reading some of your poems, and they have a feeling of something I would read in an older book of poetry. I think I understand what you mean when you say you are old school. :-)

As for Astral Projection...I admit that I have experienced it a few times, but only when I have been very sick...mostly with high fevers over 102. At the time they may have seemed like hallucinations, but then I knew things that were happening when I wasn't physically there at the time. Weird. I hope I don't sound psychotic or something! LOL But I DID like the idea of writing a poem about it when I saw the topic. So, I hope you liked the poem. Have you ever experienced anything of the sort?

I loved it that you choose nature as a comparision in this work and it works extremely well.

Best regards,

Steve

Lovely piece of work Kevin..ingenious.

I liked it. Nicely done, Kevin. 4.6/5

Thats a good way in eplaining that. good job nice peom!

Hey!! i have read ur article and i was impressed by the way u explained how shud we write the poems and wht shud be in tht poem now all i want to know plz read some of my featured poems and tell me whether they r good or not after readin urs i think they r garbage waitin for ur reply....

An excellent poem, so poignant and true. 5/5