Aww :(.. I'm sorry... Really an excellent poem. Well written. I'm sorry again :( Hope you're alright now.. Take care please. |
by Nil
This poem is very moving. Excellent i say. |
i hope you find your way and that the pieces of you are put back together properly. i also hope you find someone who will help you... no one should ever be alone. |
by pinkalias
Beautiful way to exploit your time of pain and fear. I loved your symbols of growth being cut short, and the girl who used to be. I really admired the lines |
Hun, I'm so worried about you. PLEASE hold tight Katie. I need you here. If you want to talk, you know where to find me. |
by kArMiLa
lovely poem, sad, u used all 5 senses and you are just amazing and pluz u r just too good. I adore you man.. good job... |
by xRachelx
Excellent but so sad :'( I really hope things get better for you soon. |
aww that was really good. You can email me if you want to talk... my lifes really shit right now too.. anyways, my emails plasticspud@yahoo.com |