Excellent message. I really respect that you wrote about such a sensitive and horendous subject. i like that you portrayed the danger and oblivious thoughts of the child, completly unaware of the evil that lurks around every corner, even as delicate as a school yard. Good job

in the poem. yes, she... or you.. or whoever.. heh... was only 4. anyway... Children dont really understand at that age, thats why when they first start to understand things... thats when they need to be taught. and taught hard. unless the parents and/or the kid want to forever be scarred.

But i loved this message. and i particuarly liked how you ended this poem. great one, chicka.

-Courtney-