Eternal love

by callie   Jan 15, 2005


You were everything to me.
you made me feel so real.
no one will ever see that though.
they will never know how i feel.

i thought i could change.
then you would love me.
i wanted everything for you.
but i guess i just couldn't see.

you aren't different.
you are just like the rest.
my friends say i deserve better.
but i know you were the best.

no matter how hard it gets.
you can never see that I'm hollow.
i feel like when you went away.
my heart stubbornly followed.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    awww thts so cute and a little sad...i know what it's like when friends say all this but they don't understand how hard it is...i think i have a poem tht has a little to do with tht it's called life ends....andyway thnx soooo much for commenting on my poem, i rlly appreciate it.

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Aw great poem. I loved it! Really good rhymes and it wernt too long so I didnt get bored reading it :P
    Keep writing - you got lots of talent!
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

    Thanks also for commenting on my work, its means alot to me. :)

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