as per your request. the poem was excellent. i like the repitition, you didnt go too far with it, and i liked the rhyme scheme. well written, 5/5.

hey very very nice. give ya a five.. ya seem to be a talented writer. keep it up!

I like that... very heartfelt and meaningful!!!

great poem!

very good poem keep it up.

i liked this poem...short and sweet...and somthing i can relate to..although i dont think ur stupid..like it says in the last line. take care

et kort digt, men det beskriver dine følelser så dybt og det kommer fra dit hjerte!!! Keep up the good work and please don't be sad.

*knus Sabrina*