YOU LEFT, NOT RIGHT

by Mustardhart   Jan 15, 2005


You left more pains than you met,
More questions than answers
More yen than i ever had
What can i say to all these?
I thought you are the gift,
Thought you are reality..

You took your heart
But left your fragrance
Left your embrace too
Left a promise and a call
And this worried heart.

Everything is just new to me
And cant say why.
While you take your walk
I wish you Bon voyage,
As my heart goes on.
Though you left, not right!

(c) Gagman Cleopas

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    aww hun!! i am so sorry about the loss...you will move on!! N e how, great poem, the poem's title moved me in and the poem held a lot...beautiful! and thank you dear for the comments!! God Bless
    Love Heather.

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    i could relate to this one so much...it was as if you were writing something abt me...nice poem...take care and keep smiling..FIVE>>>