by ShadowedPhoenix Jan 15, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Would you listen if I broke down and cried? |
by sophia
Thanks for the comment it really meant a lot and thanks for correcting me.... love your poems as well |
Wonderful poem. I love the thing on discussion that you read ppls poems. you must be very kind:) |
by Sherry Lynn
I take it met my ex... honestly it is though you sat and witnessed where I was a year ago and reading your piece has brought all those emotions flooding back within my heart and soul. I cannot say when I last wanted to cry after reading a poem, but this piece has stirred my emotions and left me with tears in my eyes. Thank You! |
by Dark Savior
very well, you seemed to be able to put what is in your heart onto a peice of paper or allow it to flow through the keyboard; this is a unique talent, your a very well versed person. |
by Robert
It seemed to be off kilter, best way to explain it it didn't flow for me that is. But thats just me. In time as you progress I am sure your work will be wonderful but I think your aways away. Keep it up you will get there |