great job ! keep writing. plz.
Take care,
E.

It seemed to be off kilter, best way to explain it it didn't flow for me that is. But thats just me. In time as you progress I am sure your work will be wonderful but I think your aways away. Keep it up you will get there

It seemed to be off kilter, best way to explain it it didn't flow for me that is. But thats just me. In time as you progress I am sure your work will be wonderful but I think your aways away. Keep it up you will get there

very well, you seemed to be able to put what is in your heart onto a peice of paper or allow it to flow through the keyboard; this is a unique talent, your a very well versed person.

i feel privileged to be able to read your poems.

Thank you very much for the read and also for your comments on my poems, each one i write i put a lot of effort into, i am glad someone takes notice of it.

I take it met my ex... honestly it is though you sat and witnessed where I was a year ago and reading your piece has brought all those emotions flooding back within my heart and soul. I cannot say when I last wanted to cry after reading a poem, but this piece has stirred my emotions and left me with tears in my eyes. Thank You!

--Sher

Wonderful poem. I love the thing on discussion that you read ppls poems. you must be very kind:)

Thanks for the comment it really meant a lot and thanks for correcting me.... love your poems as well