its great loving someone and being loved back, and its a good rhyme except the last one

thanks for the comment...for 14 wow, you are rocking with some talent lol! keep writing...you really know your stuff! beautiful poem, loved it truly~God Bless
Love Heather.

i love this poem! luv ur style! (by the way.. could u plz comment on my poems if u have time.. thx i would appercitate it =D)

great poem gave it a 5 xxxxx

That was a sweet poem very well written! Check out some of mine if u would please Thanx and Take Care!