The day my heart died...

by Sarah-Louise   Jan 15, 2005


I loved you with all I had in my heart,
And these feelings I felt with pride,
Your torturous words left me feeling distraught,
I sat alone every night and cried,
I won't, I can't, how could I ever admit,
That I'm nothing without you by my side,
But my angel, it's inevitable, it couldn't be changed,
How you felt the day my heart died.

God that's bad! Any tips on how I could improve it? I'd be real greatful!

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