Never ending lies

by »«¤ß詤»«   Jan 15, 2005


*me and my sister rachele wrote this together its on her profile to*

you speak to us horribly
as if we're lower class
and to be honest
we think your a bad ass
go smoke your pot
see if we care
your a drunken piss head
without any care
leave us alone
just go away
we're much happier without you
here anyway
your not our father
so why do you try?
you bluddy piss head
all you do is lie
you've got our mother fooled
through a shield of lies
but we see the truth
we know your one of those guys
our progress goes unnoticed
our faults they never end
you cant even see
that we're on the breaking end

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  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    bleak but flawless...

  • 19 years ago

    by Jomar Bautista

    Wow that is really something it was really a good poem and honestly I really like it.Thanks 4 giving comment on my work I'll try to make my work much better when you do read mine.:P

  • 19 years ago

    by Conner

    Very good. I give you an honest 4 because it seems you restated some things but the rhyme scheme is awesome and the concept is good. Take care!
    -Conner

  • 19 years ago

    by ** JeNa **

    great pome ur really really talented, hope to read more of ur work soon

  • 19 years ago

    by Hidden Meaning

    great poem . . . tell your sis that she did a great job too x x x take care x x x

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