WOw!! very good but its soo sad to think bout it lol. ITs really welll written.Keep it up!! Hope all is well!! bye = ) <33

hey girl awsome poem, whats ur sisters account?...or just tell me the name of one of her poems that'll b easier..
XOXO-holly

hey one of my sisters poems is 'MY EX BEST FRIEND' by rachele if u wana check out any of her poems.

OMG thats really really well written..i loved it lots and i sort of noe how u feel..i sorta do and then i sorta dont..but then i do but them i dont...oopz sorry..lolz its like ma habbit to do that...well newayz great work...kudoes to u and ur sister..keep it up and keep on smiling=)..ps.thx for ur comment=D means a lot to me=)

*XoX Sw33ti3*

Great poem

Hey this is good, i'm sorri to hear that...itz really good, and i think that was awesome that you and ur sister wrote it!! take care, and keep on writing..thanx for the commentz on mine!! it meanz so much to me..
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

um thanx i think not all of my work is anger based there are alot of frienship and life poems but yeah its one good thing about anger!

u like to write long poems it looks like

Good poem, it seems like this came from your heart... and I think that is what counts. Good job to you both...

I think I know someone like this!!....Very good poem dudette!...Erm...I'm into G.C, Greenday, Chilli Peppers and stuff like that....but i like other stuff too...:D...
As I sed-this poem rocks!!...Keep up the good work....Peace!!

ow, that was really well written, honest n blunt. i liked it a lot.
keep em comin.

great poem!! really good!! keep it up!! and thanks for the comments!! :)

great poem . . . tell your sis that she did a great job too x x x take care x x x

great pome ur really really talented, hope to read more of ur work soon

Very good. I give you an honest 4 because it seems you restated some things but the rhyme scheme is awesome and the concept is good. Take care!
-Conner

Wow that is really something it was really a good poem and honestly I really like it.Thanks 4 giving comment on my work I'll try to make my work much better when you do read mine.:P

bleak but flawless...