Writers Block

by Ashleigh Skye   Jan 16, 2005


My mind is running wild,
With many things to say,
None of them fit together,
And what does then breaks away.

Bits and pieces of everything,
That never quite seems right,
But yet are just close enough,
To keep me up half the night.

No longer can I express,
How I really feel,
I feel like someone else,
Has taken control of the wheel.

Maybe I am thinking to hard,
On something that just needs to flow,
Maybe I should take a break,
And quit this pointless show.

Cause if I try and force it,
It will not turn out right,
And then I'm sure my poetry,
Will not reach its true height.
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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    THATS IT!! your going into my FAVS!! i love your work!! you are very talented!! keep it up!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    belive it or not I did have writers block when I wrote this, someone told me that the best way to fight it is to write something and this is what I came up with

  • 19 years ago

    by NoPatience

    great poem i know how it feels. ur definatle on my fav. list !! ur a great poet and i love your work
    xoxo
    paulette

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Well you certainly didn't have writers block while writing it, it was excellent, I like it alot, don't ever give up forever, even if you have the worst writers block xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by SweetDreamer

    Wow, this is a really good poem, Very well written, and you really described "writer's block" to a T. That's how I feel sometimes too, lol. Nice work! If u have time, vote or comment on soe of mine, thx.

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