by ? Jan 16, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The day melts away like a snowflake, the river of time has now become simply ice, |
by Carmen
Wow... that was beautiful. I didn't really comprehend it, but only cause i'm bad at comprehending what stuff's about! 5/5 |
by Tara
5/5,,,,very beautiful poem! |
wow, simply beautiful, its amazing thoug i wish that it wasnt cut down and made into more lines than it should be, it ruins it. keep writing, my snow poem is nothing compared to this, wow |
by *tears*
Oh and I saw my name on your favorites list. :) :) :) Thank you soooo much I feel so honored. :) Oh by the way, I changed my name from "Ashley" to "Babyblue5290" because Ashley is WAY to common of a name. Take care, and keep writing!!! |
by *tears*
Wow that was good!!! I liked the words and symbolism you used. You will most definately get an A...:0) Good job |