Beautiful! I love your text, theres a certain way you describe it as if your telling a story of a wonderous being and your words are the only ones worthy enough to detail his godly power and image.
(did that sound weird?)
What I meant to say was, the way it was formatted and written was in such a stance that it seemed like you were describing some wonderous being and only the words of poetic skill could ever be powerful enough to portray his characteristics.
I love your comparisons and the text choice you use to describe the subject's aspect and power. the chosen words really create an image of a god-like creature too powerful for common language.
I especially admired the lines,
"My king as old as worlds delighting in sin and so ancient again a title as wholesome as religion. How can I ever see him as a man? That I see him thus I must be blinded for my faith."
It really portrays the subject's matter and esteem. Excellent job, beautiful.

I really do enjoy these. They are like jewelled vignettes in some greater tale unfolding. Of course, in the back of my mind, there is a growing interest in seeing the characters all unfold in some epic whirlwind amongst each other. I suppose that, though, will ultimately take a novel. Get a'writing! ;)

You utterly astound me. Your work is so different than anyone else's [in a good way]. You're so descriptive and vivid. I truly admire you, and your uncanning abilities.

Words cannot express how much more you become my muse every day.

Inspiration via trust and faith.