My Time to Die

by ** JeNa **   Jan 16, 2005


Why deal with this pain ?
Why deal with this life?
I hate it so much,
it’s full of strife.

No one trusts me,
and no one cares.
So why do I bother anymore?
There’s no one there.

I wish my life was ended ,
I wish I wasn’t here.
Please someone save me,
help me get my life in gear.

Or maybe I should let go,
because I really don’t care anymore.
Yes, there are people I love,
but I feel like I’m at war.

Now I sit and ask myself,
Should I stay or should I go?
Staying would only cause me pain,
but leaving would be kind of low.

Right now I really want to die,
that’s all I really wish.
Since there’s no one that cares,
Maybe I should just vanish.

I’m sitting here all alone
with the blade by my side.
Should I use it or should I not?
It’s not like I’ll be missed if I died.

Well I’m to the end now,
and I’m saying my goodbyes.
To the people I care about I’m so sorry,
but its my time to die.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    This poem is great and I really love what you are saying in it. Just a few tips:
    In the line where it says "it's full of strife" you need to add another single syllable word to keep the flow of the poem.
    I think there is a a mistake where it says "no one trust me," should it be "no one TRUSTS me?"

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    very sad and well written..alot of emotion in there..talented you are

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    very good, it's really good work keep it up! thanks for commenting on my poem i will also read and comment on another one of your poems!

    ~lil slam~

  • 19 years ago

    by Minkus

    Once again, I think some of the rhymes were forced. Still good though.

  • 19 years ago

    by polly

    i can relate.and i am sorry that you feel like this. i just hope that, if it is true, that there is something holding on to you.
    your poems are well written, and flow beautifully,
    polly
    xxx

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