Again, another great poem that I can relate to...Keep it up hon. |
by polly
i can relate.and i am sorry that you feel like this. i just hope that, if it is true, that there is something holding on to you. |
by Minkus
Once again, I think some of the rhymes were forced. Still good though. |
by Jacklyn
very good, it's really good work keep it up! thanks for commenting on my poem i will also read and comment on another one of your poems! |
by shannon
very sad and well written..alot of emotion in there..talented you are |
by Vanessa Lea
This poem is great and I really love what you are saying in it. Just a few tips: |