thanks!

Thats awesome, it really is. A couple of lines are a little inconsistent but then I dont care so why the hell am i pointing it out? Anyway back to the poem, the imagery is good, the rhyme pattern (though i didnt realise it went ABAB at the start i thought it was just ABCB) is really good and doesnt seem forced at all if that makes sense...
Anywho am adding you to my favs,
-Lenny