thanks for your comment...i like ur poems too, this ones my fav so far.

I read that all the way through. Then I read it a second time. Third read, it still gave me shivers.

No complicated undertones, but a strong theme communicated; your "silence" seemed almost palpable. Each of the stanzas had a really strong sense of rhythm.

I liked it. Chilling.

-paperdoll

I think that's such a great poem. It sounds like you really put your emotions into it, and you did it well. Nice work! if u have time, vote or comment on some of mine, thx!