A Magical Place

by Rockit   Jan 17, 2005


Strange things happen in different places cant explain it, but i like it such a happy cry,
silky laces my love embraces leaving subtle traces of thoughts painted in the sky,
not to mention forgot to pay attention, and realize I'm starring into your unforgettable eyes,
so unpredictable, salaciously remarkable graciously walking towards your stare,
your the truth we cant deny your there, quite peculiar, standing here in the middle of somewhere,
so familiar yet i know this strange glow drifting in the air,
rarely imitated, truly stated i endure this feeling so infatuated, hearts somewhat
related twisted faith belated but never abated.
just to know this is really what was stated cant believe how well you were created.
feeling kinda romantic, my heart is loud and gigantic,
i cant even stand it i need to make this thing happen,
i hear some voices laughing, sitting here looking silly, i must have been dreaming,
focus my seeing, I'm not in that place anymore,
how can this happen ,it was just so romantic thinking of you in despair,
tired of pretending and wishing for nothing, when in reality you are not even there.

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  • 12 years ago

    by rock serenade

    Oh boy I love it !!!!

    Can't wait till tomorrow to do this all-over thinking of u in despair,
    I'm tired of pretending, when in reality you are not even there.

    yeah it hurts and soo emotional piece you have here 5/5:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Blueleo

    Very nice poem. Really hit a few notes that are hard to hit with words. Thanks for a beautiful read.

  • 19 years ago

    by Justin

    Very good poem, that was very well written and your a very good poet, keep up the good work!

    <3 Jess