The Night I Died

by Nicole   Jan 17, 2005


I went to school
acting a fool.
I was feeling pretty
down and sad all around
I went straight home
knowing it was my time to go
I'm tired of being alone
I grabbed my knife, slit
my wrist then took some
pills and water after it
I felt I needed more
so I could leave
So I took another 13
All of sudden I collapsed
to the floor while my
eyes were blinking back and forth
I heard people come in then
they started screaming because they saw me on the floor dying
I heard my mother say "go get
help, she's dying" and telling me
to hold on, help is coming.
Others are yelling, crying,
and telling me not to leave.
3 seconds later I fell asleep
permanently
I'm sorry but I had to go
I had no purpose
I'll watch over you all always
I luv you and always will
but never so what I just did
The Night I Died.

*Please comment, i would like to know wat u think

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  • 19 years ago

    by lifelessdays11

    i really liked it!!...great job!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brian Ahn

    we all have the courage to write about suicide, and trust me i know
    but only some of us are strong enough to go through with it
    i failed at that, just like everything else
    good poem
    keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Lovemylove

    Very good I gave u a 5, its really sad but still very good.