I really liked it.. I thought it was powerful how you hate but love too.. it sucks when that happens.. have a great day and keep on writing

hey great poem.... i really like your writings .. keep it up!!

Some parts I liked, others I didn't. I'm not too sure I like these:

I hate the sun
I hate the rain
I hate your face
and I hate change

I hate how you treat me
and the way I act
I hate when I turn
to the sight of your back

I hate your friends
and how they are gay
I hate it when
you have nothing to say

Overall, a very nice poem. 4/5 Great Job, keep it up!

it was a very good poem! very powerful! the only part i wasnt too sure about was:

I hate your friends
and how they are gay

but thats just me lol
keep up the great work!

this is an interesting poem. you seem to rhyme and sometimes maybe even be joking but then you get serious again. good job tho. 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Hate is such a strong word..but I can relate to everything you hated in this poem. You get a 5 from me. The best words are the ones you can relate too in my book.

Another good one...just out of curiosity, have you tried to write any poems with rhyme schemes other than abcb? Or have you tried to write anything in freeverse?

I'm not a big fan of love poems, but i love this one, keep it up.