great poem, sad though
-K

Alyssa this poem is so great! i love it! its definately at least top 3.. hope we can talk more..
great job :)

Sarah

Aww, I'm sorry.. I guess I know what it's like to have a parent not listen to you.. I'm so sorry... I hope you're ok, maybe your dad doesn't listen to you, but I will, if you ever need anything, I'm here. This is a excellent poem, I hope you're ok, please don't leave. I hope he won't find you dead on the floor, I'm sure he'll be hurt. Take care please.
-nick

something that i wish my daddy could under stand im a cuter so i under stand

O that is so sad. I hope everything is ok now is it?? i am always here if you need anything! xoxineedyouxox@yahoo.com

~Heather~