Passionate poem...i think you should write more often...take care and keep smiling...FIVE>>>

Excellent! It gripped me to my chair till the end. well done. Serene!
Love, Trincy.

Well done! This is a very awesome poem! I luv it! Excellent job! Keep on writting

~expressive work, nandini. kumar is absolutely right, you should write more often.
~take care, 5! always believe in love, ~amit

~thank you nandini, for your kind wishes for me and my love. hope we'll make it one day together, though we have different castes, and we know it would be a tough game!
~take care, always believe in love, ~amit

hehe what an excellent written poem! Really neat work! Amazing job and thanks for the comment! Keep on writting my friend this was very well done!
Shannon

Excelent poem, wow there are a lot of good riters. Check out some of my poems when you get the chance. Check out some of my featured poems too...if u can!

Love the first stanza mostly :D
keep it up!

Heather

Fair.keep on writing...

Well written! nice poem . i liked it.