wow, i liked this poem, i can relate to it. You asked me to comment on some of yours so here i am, im going to go check out some of your other ones
Paula
xoxox

im so glad that you began to write! you've got a gift hun! poems are a great outlet for emotions aren't they?! i felt that so much. could really relate. well done xoxo thanks for the comment on mine! if you ever want to chat..mail me! im happy to listen or give advice! take care

Its a good poem, but i dont believe people should cut.. im against it. I have friends who cut and i do my best to make them happy so theres no need for them to harm themselves..

you call my poems amazing,but yours are far better.keep writing, love rain.

wow! that is such a true and awesome poem! keep it up babe!

wow, great poem, so much emotion, thanks so much for ur comment it meant alot.

xoxo
Lauren

I love ur poem. I can really relate. Thanks for the comment. Keep writing your good.

holy crap that was good!!!
ROCK ON

damn. that was really good. i can really relate and know exactly what you're going through. so yeah, i really like it.

truly amazing great work its wonderful so strong and powerful your too talented! your an O natural!

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nicely written..i like how it was set up..keep up your great work!!

loved this and can totally relate xxxxxxxxxxxxx

How do you know...you might end up in hell(worst then earth hell...maybe it's a death hell...don't know...just saying) So...don't risk the chance...you don't even know if you will live a better life if you kill yourself.