Comments : Bleak

  • 19 years ago

    by Ironic Allure

    Omg hun, I'm speechless. This poem is AMAZING. It reaches out to me in so many different ways. You know I'm always here for you, you've got my address, and if you havent, I'ts on my profile.
    I'm so sorry you're feeling like this, but please do hang on in there. I'm trying so hard now and I know you've been suffering longer than me, too long most probably. But please don't give up on me. I love your poems, they're beautiful.
    I love this stanza:
    I’m really tired of this same old battle
    This battle that’s in my mind
    I keep trying to find the light and the hope
    But this pain has left me blind
    ..I'm crying now :( Please don't give up.
    Take care of yourself, Keep your head high.
    All my love,
    Laura.

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku so much hun, i'll try and hang on in there xxxxxx thankyou

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku xx

  • 19 years ago

    by deadnalone

    hun that poem is amazing. a m a z i n g!! AAAAMMMAAAZZZIIINNNGGG!!!! lol. really. u aint fighting dis alone hun, u got loads of us dat wana help u. okay? its a beautiful poem hun,
    take care,
    ellie
    *lots of hugs and luv*

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku ppl! xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Oliver Stevenson

    Such n amazing poem, please dont give up hun and it wont be long till it is all better, dont give up on me hun, not now, dont give in xxxxxxx i love you hun, take care and i'll see you tonight xxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Toni

    Thanku xx