*Sigh*.... Lovely.

I was going to say at the start that it's not up to your usual quality of work... but I think you definetely improved throughout it. The stanzas became less forces and more flowing, the words became more vibrant... well, just my opinion. Still love your work though!

i really like this poem. its written so differently. i really thought it was great. i like the imagry of the boy at mass. i could imagine the scene. wonderful job.