by Luke Jan 18, 2005
category :
Internet slang /
life, society
They were so young, |
by EpithetPoet
I liked the ending sequence to this and how you spelled america with a k, reminds me of that one rammstein song. completes the whole poem. nice job. |
by SCARECROW
Nice poem, though the 2nd is better. And their heats are torn.. Do you mean hearts? Still, good poem, it's an awesome piece of work. |