Comments : Welcome to Paradise [Amerika]

  • 19 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Nice poem, though the 2nd is better. And their heats are torn.. Do you mean hearts? Still, good poem, it's an awesome piece of work.

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    I liked the ending sequence to this and how you spelled america with a k, reminds me of that one rammstein song. completes the whole poem. nice job.
    -A