"No shit, not my Darie Aire" I liked your poem, but I dunno what a "Darie Aire" is, but I think you mean "derriere" if you meant ass. Anyhow, I thought had a fun rhythm and funny thoughts (well some were pretty sad and pathetic thoughts, but I get where you are going with it).

LOVE IT!

Wow.. This is very creative and unique! I liked it alot! Keep it up! 5/5...

**~**Sedusha**~**

i love it !!!! very creative!!!

oh yeah i love the creativity in you! its an awesome piece of work!! *5 no doubt!! God Bless
Love Heather

Really very Awesome inspired.

Keep it up!

5/5

wow that is like really good

You need to post this everywhere, a really good poem, that everyone should hear. I really like reading you're poems, you're very honest in how you write.
xx