I loved this poem Paula...it was very inspirational...we all need to take the time out to realize how good we have it and not take everything so for granted....keep up the good work girl It really was an awesome poem.

It's good but it's sounds to over done. do you know what I mean? Like to many ppl have done something like that. but your other poems are great!

another wonderful peice you got here. I absolutly loved it. You are truely tlented. 5/5 all the way!

Sadly this is very true...well written hunnie.