This is the first poem i've submitted here...thanks for the comment.

each to their own...this poem was actually inspired by another shorter one, just 4 lines long. i thought it was such a nice poem, but lacked "meat" if you know what i mean..so i wrote this

Nice poem!....

That was short, but incredible. I loved it.

loved it, so short but soo sweet
i like very much your stuff

. . . p i l i ♥

UGH im seriously so jealous... when i first read the title of your poem i thought " oh no not onother roses are red violets are blue" kind of shit poem... but this one... theres somthing unique about it. you made it different, you made it you. i like it... its such raw emotion i could never get into my poems... i just wish i had such the creativity you posess.....

I love it! Its so hard to put so much feeling into a small poem, I congradulate you for doing that, and writing an amzing poem. Keep up the writing, You have true talent.

But our love stays strong.
---omg such a great ending!....5/5....i was wondering will you comment my new poem FOR ONCE....thanks!!...comment back pleasee!!