i loved it! I hope you wite another one just as good.

hey really good poem i like it alot, you might want to check out some of my poems like maybe "My Best Friend" if you like these kinds, but this one is really good keep up the writing

~lil slam~

wow...need i say more? i can relate to this...its amazing...

wow this was SO sad very touching great job

Thank you all for commenting this means so much to me that people like my poems! Thanks!
<3randy!

Kind of long, but definatly worth the read. The rhyming was good, but the rhythem was not so good. Try to make each line about the same length and/o number of syllables. It will make it sound SO much better. Still, a woderful peice. Keep it up and stay strong.
Take care,
-Cheerfully Cynical

I loved you're poem I can relate to what you're going through keep up the good work and i hope life get's better and if not death will be peaceful.

thanks cheerfully cynical i love critcism...i'll work on it and see what happens! thanks guys! that means the world to me!