I can relate to the poem,its very good.

Your poem was easy to relate to in my case! love it!

wowowow, this is excellent! and I'm not just saying that, you've told her story really well, it reminds me of a story I am studying in class at the moment.......

Aw...thats sad...but nicely written great job

now this one i like!! thourougly enjoyed! *5
Love Heather.

Great ryhth scheme 5/5 read mine sometimes bye

WOW! THAT IS REALLY GOOD! I love your work!!!!!!!! Im gonna read more!!!
Im addicted!!!!!

great poem loved it >5<

Very sad. Great rhymes and rhythm.

wicked!! i love it lol

hey that one was awsome too...
keep writing...
kk...
*kathleen*

wow that was a great poem, ur a really talented writer, good job!!

OK..Good Poem But I Dont Get Some Words
Anyway Keep Ur Good Work
Take Care
Nema
XoXoXOX

Another great poem. Loved it til the end. Keep it up!

~*~Christina~*~

Vanessa...this one had me in tears...truly... is this a memory or just soemthing you've thought up?

Kayla
XOXO

Great poem!!! I like this part:

It is a nightmare the places she goes,
A cold and unhappy vacation.

Awesome job! 5/5.

Tiffany.xox.

Never become like this.
..xx