Something beFit of Life; Hidden Praise

by Krete   Jan 19, 2005


I imagine her heart.
I imagine the break,
that began to start,
when she fell apart.

The swollen tears,
in her creators eyes,
they dropped on her blankets,
covered in cries.

I hate the echo,
the ruptured vault,
a sad insinuity,
of the broken halt.

It was always a halt,
a dead blank stare,
she use to give into,
before she had her affair.

Life was like an ailment,
a stalwort broken tube,
an emotion tied victory,
a sadness of the stew.

time of hers,
her very own,
this child young,
would 9 months groan.

I imagine her cries,
as sadness bedside,
slowly died.

I, too, begin to see,
the boy by her side,
began to be,
a broken one; whom cried.

So, I, too, begin to wonder,
as to why this life,
is so deep in plunder.
and as to why there exists: Strife.

Peace is so calm,
but when canon plays,
I forget myself,
and go to that certain malaise.

Childhood Days.
Graduation Craze.
Sadness Malaise.
Broken Stays.

Hidden Praise.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Priscilla

    GREAT Job!! I loved it!!!!!!!!keep it up! def. 5/5 god bless bye!

  • Wow!! Just wow this is so amazingly beautiful, I luved it. I really like the last verse, its interesting...Truly Excellent Poem! Two thumbs up! And keep on writting!
    Shannon:o)

  • 19 years ago

    by Luke

    duude, k-rete, you rock my literary world. your style is insane with the constantly intense vocab. the common themes, women, mistakes, sadness, lonliness, loss, they really build up. congrats on the tix, lemme know what happens. awesome poem!!!
    Peace Out, Luke

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Oh my gosh, wow, this was just so amazing! I loved it. You wrote it so well and each stanza fit together so smoothly! Wonderful job!!! =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    this poem did really touch my heart....for some reason,i couldn't say anything after reading this poem...awesome poem...the last stanza was excellent...take care and keep smiling..FIVE>>>