Jessie...this is an awesome poem! greatt job! even when writing late at night! you still manage to do an awesome job! And im soo happy that your feeling better and that your happy!! |
by Daniel J
Very cool poem there. It rhymes, good flow and nice content. |
by Jess
Yes this is based on my own personal experience, and thank you for the comment :o) |
by ChildofGod87
Awwww Wow... I can relate to this! Stay strong girl and don't let a guy ever hurt you!!! Man, I don't like when guys hurt as girls especially with pain! *You find a good/great guy* God Bless you! *5/5* Keep on writing! (Check of my poems if you get the chance... Suggestion 4 ya to read if you'd like "Such A Lie" and my new poems =you choice) |
ive felt like that before my ex changed me and then i changed to far to something that no one likes now cz of the way i am...lol wonderful though |
by Alex D
omg i loved it! your so going on my favorites |