In distance We Now Remain

by Libby M   Jan 19, 2005


I close my eyes
And I drift away
Into a different hour
Into a different day
I close my eyes
And There I see you
Standing tall, and
Handsome as always.

I’m finally here-
Your only few
Steps away-
We are breathing
The same Godly Air.
I am close enough
To touch you-
But we both know
I can’t.

You are so close-
Yet so far away.
I begin to wonder
How did I ever
Reach this place again?
I’ve closed My eyes
So many times before-
Beside you I always laid
But this time-
I am farther-and I don’t
Seem to understand.

I close my eyes-
And there you stood
With a smile-Stretched
From ear to ear.
I smiled back-You refused
To look away...
And As I approached you...
As I held you-I saw you
Holding her instead.

I closed my eyes again-
And as a shadow I saw
Myself.
Standing beside you-
You don’t even seem to
Care...
I am here-You are over there
We are miles apart
Because a year ago-
They announced me dead.

Libby M.
Jan. 19.2005

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  • 19 years ago

    by EJ

    wow the ending of that was awesome!! i kept trying to figure it out and just couldnt understand.. but then i got to the end and like wow it all made sense!! excellent job!! bye bye EJ..

    PS.. my name is Elizabeth Joyce my friends call me Liz but i rather go by EJ just b/c its short and easy to type.. and i like the way it sounds.. lol.. just me though..

  • 19 years ago

    by -->>Vicky

    that was a terrific poem...i loved it..i gave it a 5 cause it really deserves it...if u can take a lil time and check out my poems i will really appreaciate it if u comment or rate them...keep up da good work...vicky

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebekah

    This is a great poem, i like it alot. good work

  • 19 years ago

    by Libby M

    I really appreciate you guys for taking the time to read and share your thoughts about my work.. IT means the world to me

    Love,
    Libby

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Libby, This was a beautiful poem. I enjoy your work so much. You've been in my favorites since you commented on one of my poems. Your work is a pleasure to read as Stormy said. lol