i love it

woh! the first time i read that i thought that the ending was really a shock, but the second time the whole thing makes sense! This is a brill poem, much deeper than you first expect! 5 and on my favourites! keep it up
xxx

Libby, This was a beautiful poem. I enjoy your work so much. You've been in my favorites since you commented on one of my poems. Your work is a pleasure to read as Stormy said. lol

I really appreciate you guys for taking the time to read and share your thoughts about my work.. IT means the world to me

Love,
Libby

This is a great poem, i like it alot. good work

that was a terrific poem...i loved it..i gave it a 5 cause it really deserves it...if u can take a lil time and check out my poems i will really appreaciate it if u comment or rate them...keep up da good work...vicky

wow the ending of that was awesome!! i kept trying to figure it out and just couldnt understand.. but then i got to the end and like wow it all made sense!! excellent job!! bye bye EJ..

PS.. my name is Elizabeth Joyce my friends call me Liz but i rather go by EJ just b/c its short and easy to type.. and i like the way it sounds.. lol.. just me though..