The last verse in this poem properly brings this together. Your phrasing is someting I've never come across, untouchable.
You do, however, have one typo in the 3rd stanza:
'Yet there seems to be no escape
I'm lose in a spiral of confusion'
..Should 'lose' be 'lost?'
Apart from that, flawless.
Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

Typo edited :)

whoever gave this a three was a BUTT-MONKEY!! its a great piece. doesnt wander from the topic, keeps the same style for the most part, kept the rhyme well aswell. it wasnt your best work by any means, but i still liked it enough to rate higher than a FRIGGAN 3!!! loll, peace outtt