by creasy Jan 19, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
You say you love me, you say you care; |
good job i think you made a point |
wonderful poem. |
by Minkus
Good job on this one, just try not to use comments so much and stuff... and get a little more rhythm in your lines. That's it, good job! |
by creasy
thanks for allt he comments!! they are greatly appreciated!! keep up all your great work!! :) peace and love. |
wow great poem i love the way it was set out your a talented poet it really shows in your work you have a gift great poem once again i mean it! 5/5 |