My Big Sister

by SmileeItsBritt   Jan 19, 2005


I'm so sorry that I did this
I hurt the one closest to me
I didn't mean for this to happen
This wasn't supposed to be
I'm so sorry I was blind
To see that someone cared
I was also too deaf to hear the words
That someone wanted me here
I'm so sorry that I scared her
I wish her tears didn't fall
I wish I could turn back time
So she wouldn't know at all
I'm so sorry that she worried
I never meant for this to be
I'm so sorry that this happened
I just want her to see
That even though I've done this
It doesn't mean that I don't care
For I love her like a sister
And I'm so glad that shes there
I feel like I've known her forever
We have a bond no one can break
She wants to help me for real
I know shes not a fake
She walked into my life
When the pieces were apart
She helped put them back together
And made an imprint in my heart

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  • 19 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    another great peice of work... disapointing anyone is hard but when its ypur sister... ive been there... xox Sherrie

  • 19 years ago

    by Scarlette

    The best line out of that entire piece was "She walked into my life
    When the pieces were apart
    She helped put them back together
    And made an imprint in my heart". Honestly, I just thought it was... okay. Nothing special. It was just a tad emotional, but it lacked the essence of this sorrow that you say you're feeling. I read it, but I think, so what? You need to put in a lot more emotion. You also need to read your poetry before posting it up.. "shes" is not a word. It's "she's". I just don't think it's necessary to leave out the apostraphe. BUT, it was still okay. It wasn't horrible - though it just wasn't wonderful either.

  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    I agree with Ashley. It was a well written poem, but it didn't really tell a story, or anything like that.

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