WHY DID YOU LEAVE?

by kevin   Jan 19, 2005


Why did you leave me?
why couldn't you see the love i wanted to give you?
but no instead you leave and rip my soul away from me like it never existed.
i thought you cared but i was wrong.
i thought i could trust you but no instead of trust you just rip my soul out.
why why? how could you leave?
i will never forget the pain you put me through.
i will never forget.

please comment!!!

e mail me if you have any question's kevin_looney58@yahoo.com

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  • 19 years ago

    by Chelsea

    IT SEEMED LIKE YOU PUT A LOT OF BOTTLED UP EMOTION INTO IT. I THINK IT NEEDS A LITTLE BIT OF WORK. BUT IT WAS VERY GOOD ND I GIVE YOU PROPS! CAN YOU READ MINE TOO!? chelsea

  • 19 years ago

    by Kylie

    Hey that was good. It sounds like a lot of feeling went into that too, and it was good. You need to work on your poetic style some but that will come with time. Keep it up!

  • 19 years ago

    by rachel

    That was sad but beautiful. I can relate. My boyfriend just left me a couple of months ago and I still can't seem to get over it even though he hurt me more than anyone else ever had. Please read some of my poems. I'd really appreciate it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Mishel

    I'm sorry that they left you, i hope things get better for you soon. it was a good poem. <3

  • 19 years ago

    by Breezy

    wow i relate to this alot i love it i gav e it a 5 check out some of mine luv ~*breezy*~

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