wow i relate to this alot i love it i gav e it a 5 check out some of mine luv ~*breezy*~

I'm sorry that they left you, i hope things get better for you soon. it was a good poem. <3

That was sad but beautiful. I can relate. My boyfriend just left me a couple of months ago and I still can't seem to get over it even though he hurt me more than anyone else ever had. Please read some of my poems. I'd really appreciate it.

Hey that was good. It sounds like a lot of feeling went into that too, and it was good. You need to work on your poetic style some but that will come with time. Keep it up!

IT SEEMED LIKE YOU PUT A LOT OF BOTTLED UP EMOTION INTO IT. I THINK IT NEEDS A LITTLE BIT OF WORK. BUT IT WAS VERY GOOD ND I GIVE YOU PROPS! CAN YOU READ MINE TOO!? chelsea