pretty good poem you have here. I liked it. take care and keep up the good work

hey nice poem very awsome...keep up the good work....check out mine vote and comment....

~LoTz Of LuV
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The middle is a lil confuzin, but this poem is awsum.

Awww....great poem!!! I loved it, you did an awesome job with it

Very good poem.....Emotive & expressive....& you say poetry isn't your strong point??....:O....It rocks!

i love this poem, powerful peice, it flowed beautifully, well written. tak e care.

Aww, that was sweet and i loved it, keep writing please
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