oh hunnie that was awsome! i really hope your getting better! i miss you!
xoxoxoxoxoxooxoxo
jescelle

Another great poem, I've felt this way before and you've expressed it beautifully. Good job.

when I'm depressed, I find the darker side of thought intriguing. This poem somes it up perfeclty. nice write

This is an amazing poem!!! I love it!!! I'm glad you got a new one! I miss reading your new poems! They are so great! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

wow, a deep effective poem, i loved every bit of it, keep up the amazing work! cant wait to read your next poem! take care xxxx

awww that was very sad! i hope you soon get better. you are a wondeful person and you don't deserve the pain that you have. i will pray for you each and every night. anyways i gave this poem a 5/5! thanks for commenting on my poems. it means alot! :P well i hope you get better soon!

XoXoX
Sarah

Amazing...made me really think of how great your talent is. You have a great way of expressing yourself and reaching out to ppl and be right on target of their feelings. I just love reading your work, you truly are just an amazing gal. Still praying everything in your life works for the best, take care and send me an e-mail if you need someone to listen to anything you want to say.
loves girl!
-allen

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It was great. Really liked it.

great poem.. you have a great talent

Your poem is great, I can relate to it alot, your words all seem to just fit.
My fav. part is:
'The fireworks I hear, the celebration I see.
The excitement is buzzing, but not through me.'
I can really relate to that bit the most.

Thanx for all your comments, and thank you so much for adding me to your fav. list, I'm so honoured, your such a great writer! Thanx again it really means alot to me
xxxtake carexxx

i cant talk to anyone anymore im sorry hunnie, i am getting worse, i am pushing people away and...sadly, im spiraling down, email me if you get the chnace

This was really good, Andrea! :) I really liked it. Thank you for ALL of the recent comments, lol.. I was bombarded by red numbers when I logged on! lol. Thanks! =) Well, keep up the great work & I hope you get better soon! Take care!

God bless you! <3

Excellent poem Andrea! I liked this a lot, very truthful of today's society. Take care, and please keep writing, I'll read more when I get the chance