by Serena Jan 19, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Eyelids flutter, Breathing slows, |
Exquisite, wonderfully done!!! |
by Fatimah
Serena you're talented and your talent is unique, I like your words. What I didn't like was that there is too little space between a group of lines and the next group, it made me read it too fast and didn't get the full taste of it :D |
good job!! i like your poems a lot, keep writing! please read and comment mine if u get the chance. |