good job!! i like your poems a lot, keep writing! please read and comment mine if u get the chance.
-Molly

Serena you're talented and your talent is unique, I like your words. What I didn't like was that there is too little space between a group of lines and the next group, it made me read it too fast and didn't get the full taste of it :D

Anywayz, good luck!

Exquisite, wonderfully done!!!