by Valerie Jan 19, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
She glanced at him |
Your a great writer. Nice work very well written and it flows perfect. The same that I'm feeling right now. Great work!!! =) 5/5 |
Your poetry amazes me. You have a rare talent. You are added to my faves girl! |
this is so beautiful! it brought tears to my eyes. this is one of my favorites too, great job!! 5/5 |
by Conner
Great poem! If there was a 4.5 thats what I'd give you bc its almost to that excellent stage but not just quite. Revision could be used but that doesn't matter. If you round that 4.5 off you get a 5!! Keep up the good work and never stop writing. You have talent. Take care! |
by UM
This is very nice...however some of it seems to not flow right...just my opinion. |