awww thats really good! keep writing i like your poems!

Hey it's cute! Good job.

Thanks for the insight. It makes me feel great that people understand and enjoy my poems. *Valerie

OMG!!! I love this poem. You did an awesome job. Keep up the good work.

It's not that long and it's awesome ! Very well written. xxx

wow that is a very touching poem ... it made me feel sorry for the girl but when i read the end i was so happy i almost shed a tear .... "I only love you " very very good poem

WONDERFUL I LOVED IT .ITS SO BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHED ME SERIOUSLY YOU ARE IN MY FAVOURITES OMG IM STILL ALWAYS SHOCKED YOU ARE SO GOOD CONGRATS SERIOUSLY ...WOW...5/5

Awww! that was so beautiful girl! absolutly LOVED it. O_O *stares in amazement* that was wicked awesome. definatly a 5/5! take care and keep it up!

-Cheerfully Cynical

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww, I love this one!!!!!!!UR A GREAT WRITER! KEEP IT UP

I love this poem so much well done valerie... the first couple of stanzas i can really relate to coz my bf never confided in me .... anyways well done on ur talented poem keep it up

wow i loved this one! i was so sad until i got to the end and then i almost started crying! lol keep up the great work!

This is very nice...however some of it seems to not flow right...just my opinion.

Great poem! If there was a 4.5 thats what I'd give you bc its almost to that excellent stage but not just quite. Revision could be used but that doesn't matter. If you round that 4.5 off you get a 5!! Keep up the good work and never stop writing. You have talent. Take care!
-Conner

this is so beautiful! it brought tears to my eyes. this is one of my favorites too, great job!! 5/5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

Your poetry amazes me. You have a rare talent. You are added to my faves girl!

Your a great writer. Nice work very well written and it flows perfect. The same that I'm feeling right now. Great work!!! =) 5/5