thats really good...is your way of getting your point across of what you believe...i like it :P xx

great poem! i love this! i can relate to this really easily! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

I can't personally say that I believe in God, but I thought this poem was very touching nonetheless...out of curiosity....who were you refering to in the poem, other then God....I mean if you don't mind telling me....

Kalika

I loved this poem! Yes there is a God. He is there to help you through everything. Rely on Him and you can't go wrong.
Take care and God bless!

I read your post in the writing section...and after looking at two of your poems...my initials thoughts in terms of improvements is flow, or rhythem [ which i can't ever spell correctly].

The subject matter is cool..and the things you have to say are interesting...but the way it reads out loud...it just doesn't roll off the tongue very well....maybe you should try, just for an experiment, at writing poem in classic structures...like 4 lines a stanza...and all the lines have roughly the same amount of syllables, and the last words of each line rhyme.

Good luck.